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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

Yup! This story really hit me. There's such a powerful sense of longing and transformation in Taraneh’s journey. The way you captured her shift from confinement to freedom was so moving, and the imagery, especially the garden and the sky, felt so real and vivid. I really appreciate the depth and emotion you put into this piece. Thank you for sharing it!

And oh yes, it was worth the wait.

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habib aslam's avatar

Thank you for the story. Short story is a very difficult area. I think a book is easier. Nevertheless its a very nice story. So many of us are trapped in a cage and not even know! We just need to understand- What may seem impossible is not necessarily true and secondly life is so short.

On another note people have forgotten 'simple' pleasures of life. You can run around or laze around for ours pursuing a pleasure that actually you could have had much more easily & simply closer to home.

Your thoughts that are posted after the story or even more poignant than the story. You should keep writing your book and remember -you are writing it for the pleasure of writing. Its for you and the readers are important but not even half as important than your own pleasure of writing it.

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